Mapping Stars - Comments

I can already tell this is going to be a great story, cause you are clearly a great writer! I know there isn't much to go on, but with that perfect summary to pull you in and your descriptions in the first chapter you've already displayed so much talent! I just keep rereading the first chapter, and seriously, you've started this piece beautifully even with a short opening!

I don't know if I've read anything by you before, but I'm already looking forward to this and will definitely need to check out more of your stories!

Summary
Okay, oh my God, I love that quote in the summary! It's so, so beautiful. And then the actual summary bit was equally as beautiful and emotional. Bless this, I'm so excited!

Content
Okay, so usually I'm not one for drabbles, but this was so beautiful. I could see everything you're describing, and I loved that about this! I loved how this ties into the summary, especially with this:

Quote

Tomorrow would be a new day - and with it, hopefully, less rain.

For such a short piece, this was so beautiful. I absolutely love how you used the photo in the story and wow, wow, wow. Well done!

I'm not entirely sure on how I feel about this. There isn't much to feel, in reality; this is less of a story, and more of an experience, kind of. You paired music with an image with words, and that's a very cool and creative thing to do. A short drabble here, a song to go with, and the inspiration tacked on. I would have never thought of it.

But also, I feel like this is done so often here on Mibba. I also feel like I'm biased due to my general distaste for drabble, but nonetheless, you used great imagery in the writing, and paired it with a very fitting song and image.

Edith Buchanan? Sebastian Carter? Those names remind me of something...

okay, what the hell @ the summary bc that was absolutely short, simple & overwhelmingly perfect. as is your layout so kudos to skywalker! it really elaborates the tone of this little piece which of course highlights your wicked writing skills.

ALSO W/ THE PICS & MUSIC @ THE END I COULD SEE THIS IN MY HEAD SO CLEARLY. like the words blending w/ these images almost like the start of a movie where im waiting for credits to pop up like STARRING:SOMEONE FAMOUS or something.