To Whom It May Concern - Comments

Hi, it's me again!

May I just say how much in love I am with Tallulah? She is so relatable and reading her entries just makes me want to be her friend or something. I'm sure we can bond pretty pretty well. Talullah's mother is an eccentric woman and I love her! Her whole family seems so sweet! I'm very excited to see where you're really taking this now. And Brand, yeah? I know you say this isn't going to be romantic-type of story but a little crush won't hurt. If anything, I think it will make the story more interesting.

Well, I've really enjoyed this update and see you again next time!

p/s: Thank you for the shout-out.

First and foremost, I would like to say, I love what you did with the introduction chapter. Starting it out as a diary entry makes it more personal to the readers and somehow makes me want to get to know Talullah more. I love how eccentric her parents were in naming their children. And I especially love how realistically you wrote her father being too excited of being a first time dad that he didn't actually acknowledge or notice anything surrounding him.

I laughed loudly when I read how Brock got his first name. I loved Friends and immediately the name Chandler stood out to me. So when you explained further that that's where their parents got the name from, I just can't help but laughing. I'm so delighted by it!

All in all, I really think this story has a very great start, very gripping and very entertaining. Your writing style is so breezy and easygoing that makes me having fun reading it. Keep up the good work!