I found this story a few weeks back ago and I've just finished reading until your last update. Besides grammatical errors, this story is quite charming. Your writing seems to improve as the story goes on. Hope you keep it up! I look forward to more.
@ punxmarley Uggghh I absolutely adore that movie! But no, I tried my best to make the whole "situation" between them a lot different than other stories if that make sense ? lol but I love the feed back ! Thank you darling.
i came across your story, read it up to 22, and i love it! i have a bad bad feelin that shit is bout to hit between her, BJ, and Jim. i personally think Jim is a asshat lols anyways, i love it and can't wait for the next update!!
Aw yeaaaahhh. I use to read a lot of Billie Joe stories back in 2006 and I've yet to find a "good" one since, until now. Looking forward to your next update.
January 31st, 2016 at 10:16pm
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