Tainted Halls - Comments

thats okay. i was just really interested about how that left off.

@ LaniLoser
I'm trying to write more but I'm like in a block right now.
I've been going through a lot but I'm gonna try to finish this then post the chapters in one huge chunk.
If I feel like it's taking too long I'll post what I have, I'm so sorry.

are you kidding?! please dont end like that!

Comment swap!
Eventhough you shouldn't judge a book by its cover, I do really like the layout you made. The story is easily read and it suits. I do agree with Albluerose, there are some errors in the story but none you can't fix with exchange of a few letters. I am dutch so I usually let someone who's first language is english read my stuff before I upload. Little errors are easily made and its a good way to get them out.

as far as the story, I would have never thought of a voldermort raping people, but its an original spin on things!

I truly loved this part: "How often had she found herself dazed and contemplating death? Probably too often to be considered sane, and probably not enough to be considered troubled by her peers in her family." The way you describe her contemplating is amazing.

The chapters are well set up and I like the overall idea. Eventhough I'm not that into fanfiction of any kind, I do believe you should continue this story because it has great potential.

Chapter one.
When she snapped out it the pain
Did you mean "snapped out of the pain,"
at know what
"And know"

The moment I read voldamorts baby, I was like what!? Baby!? Abort abort mission!

thing about
thinking about.

her throw
Her throat.

her worst own
Her own worst.

There were a few mistakes, I probably missed some but I do enjoy the way you are writing it. I'm not nit picky over mistakes as we all make them, I'm glad Molly is being very helpful.

Chapter two.
now than before
Now more than before

the n
Then
even she had heard
Did you mean hadn't?

No you,
Not

Aw, she kept the baby and got all protective!! Mam Harry better watch himself! But I hope this baby isn't just a ploy for voldamort!

Chapter three.
at least she was till she was informed that it could go well into her last month of pregnancy

I feel like there should be a comma somewhere in here, maybe between was and till.

thought she was
Though.

There were a few more errors but my phone is dying. I really like this so far and I would love to see where this is going to go. Thank you for your comment on my story :)

Love this, please update soon :)

Love this, please update soon :)