Broken Loyalty - Comments

@ RFarley1991
And habit it such a hard thing to break

The only thing I can even think to predict is that Lucas is going to try to change for a little while and go back to his old ways. He seems like a creature if habit, no matter how at odds it makes him and his wolf.

@ RFarley1991
Glad to have you!!!! I'm glad you like it. I hated always reading the same thing over and over and was hoping to do something different. I definitely wanted to change the wolf/human conversations. Yeah they are different but the same.

Do you have any predictions on what might come? I've been working on the next chapter while at work tonight (while on breaks), and I can't wait for it to be done!

I just found this story the other day and I love that it's not like all other stories! I'm excited to see where this is going! I can't wait to see what happens with Lucas back as a human

@ grace_lou_freebush
What do you do while on break at work? Work on the next chapter because you're super excited for it! Come on Gracey (see what I did there?), what were you thinking when Lucas was standing there?

Oh, shit! So excited for the next one! This story has become my escape, so thank you for posting it. Let's see how Lucas handles the situation!

@ BlueEyedAngel2
It is in the works. I've rewritten the beginning a few times because its just not coming out the way I want though

Getting super excited about what will happen next!!!

@ grace_lou_freebush
I might not update again for a day or two, I have family up visiting right now. I'll work on it though. Glad you're loving it!

So excited that Lucas is starting to realize how awful he's been. I'm sure it's still a long way to go before he starts to really treat Grace right, and even longer for her to start trusting him after all this, but this first step was so important! I love how fast you've been updating, but I still can't wait for the next one! Keep up the amazing work!

@ grace_lou_freebush
"Next time on Broken Loyalty, will Lucas mend his ways and start treating Grace the way a mate should be treated? Or will Grace get her hands on a 2x4 and knock him the fuck out?"

But in all seriousness in this book the wolf and human don't communicate with words but feelings. You may or may not begin to see more of his wolf's feelings towards his mate. Lucas is one messed up male who got his man feelings hurt and can't let it go.

I feel so bad for Grace because it wasn't supposed to be like this! By now they were supposed to kinda be getting along a little but Lucas can't let go of his man pride. Do see how crazy his thoughts turned in this chapter? But was it just his thoughts and feelings or a mixture of his and his wolfs?

Oh no. Poor Grace and Anthony. Lucas is just going about it all wrong. If he reaaaaaaally wanted her to feel pleasure, he wouldn't be forcing her to do anything. And I have to say I don't believe him when he says he's going to magically start treating her right once she's pregnant. People don't change their habits that fast, and he's also admitted to not caring what he does to her or what happens to her anyway. Is his wolf more romantic/more likely to feel guilt over mistreating his mate? I would love to see his wolf start rebelling against the way he's treating his mate. The next chapter isn't going to be any fun for Grace. :[[ But I can't wait anyway!

@ BlueEyedAngel2
Right? Seems like this poor girl can't catch a break.

Just read the last chapter... oh poor Grace!

Lol yeah. Although when I think about it I also want to do in my female characters sometimes as they are too...me? You know? And it anyone annoys me more than me idk

@ BlueEyedAngel2
Right???? All I know is that Lucas needs to get it together

Lol. Sometimes. Mostly just the male love interest... gah men (even ones I make up) suck

@ BlueEyedAngel2
You want to throw yours off of bridges also?

Lol you have a similar relationship with your characters as I do with mine

@ BlueEyedAngel2
Aww, thank you my dear. Sometimes it can be a little twisted but hey, we need to keep things interesting. Had a dream about Lucas last night. I'm unsure if to use it in the story or not. It could be tough redeeming him after this. The bastard likes to torment me and then act like he is the innocent one in all of this.