Let This Remain - Comments

@ nvmthebflies Thank you!! I'm working on updating again. I appreciate your encouraging words!!

girl, Idk if you'll even see this, but I started reading this on ao3 and I almost died because it only had two parts. I searched the story on google and here I am. Beautiful so far. Your descriptions are amazing. Thank you so much for sharing. ♡

TOTALLY BEAUTY AND THE BEAST! oh man. I mean this as a compliment. I love the newest chapter. I enjoy that she doesn't pick up on the social queues. The writing was absolutely stunning and so poetic. The way the whole scene played out had my stomach in knots. I love that a single moment took the whole chapter. Beautifully written without being over redundant, which could have been easy to do! So bravo!!!

Oh. My. God. Loved this chapter so much. I know I'm repeating myself, but it is beautifully written, as always. I like jealous Austin, very much so, and am anticipating what happens next.

This story is absolutely beautiful and wonderfully written. Your use of language, and the way you write how Liana thinks, makes me think I'm a fly on the wall, witnessing everything that is taking place. It really is fantastic. Can't wait to see where it goes!

Love the update! Do I detect jealousy from Austin? Although I Adam curious what he'll say. Maybe Odie is a playboy and perhaps he doesn't want Liana falling for that. Hm. I love your stories so much!

@ grotesque bones.
Thank you! I always love hearing what you think about my stories/characters~

"That being said, I had known very few men in my life. But I knew Austin wasn’t bad. He wasn’t like my father, or like my father’s grimy friends with loose hands." there's power to this statement! It really makes me think about what it's like to not know other people. How one could or could not be so trusting of other people. I enjoy the constant thought process and things Liana talks about. Very well done.

Not done reading but I'll continue to comment later. So sorry I missed all the updates. Life's been insanely busy and I had to lend my laptop out since I spilt wine all over my friends.

@ lawlren
Thank you <3

Can't wait for the next one! Great update!

Yessssss.

Intriguing!! I can't wait to read the next part.

You are honestly such a great writer, hope to get more stories from you !

“I wasn’t used to this, to feeling safe, feeling like I didn’t have to worry” this gave me chills. It’s such a scary feeling in itself.

The scene with the photograph had a very “Beauty and the Beast” feel to it. Not just because of the wild animal reference. But I really like this scene.

"I didn’t need other people. I felt the knot in my chest begin to loosen, my stomach settling. Shake it off" Ironically, I was listening to Taylor Swift’s shake it off. I just had to share. Because I never listen to Taylor.

I KNEW SHE WOULD RUN INTO THE PAST AT THE STORE. Thought her dad, but close enough…And yes! Austin ftw!

I'm really excited for this story!

Soooooooooo good. Left me with chills. Super descriptive and I love every essence of this.