Every Once in a While - Comments

Isla reaction is the same as mine if i was getting hit by hail. I would totally would have been the biggest grouch. Poe being cheeky is the cream on the pie after a ruined date.

Oh my god this is the cutest chapter so far! I am so excited for the next one. Isla being scared and Poe not getting annoyed but her reactions or even comments just staring her down. LOL the best part and truly shows the patience he has.

!!! Chapter 6 and 9 are my favorites just because they have some of my favorite Poe moments in them. In chapter 6, "Most girls don't show up at guys' rooms this late just to talk." I was trying so hard not to squeal haha. He's such a gentleman, too.

Also, in chapter 9!
When he responds, "I don't mind, not one bit," the dialogue is just so gooood.

"He reached up to rest his hand on my shoulder, his thumb rubbing small circles on my neck. "I want you all to myself." My breath hitched, and my insides turned to mush." I got chills when I read this part, these two might have been my favorite little parts so far.

Your dialogue is absolutely wonderful, and I feel like I'm there with how you describe things. It's a perfect balance of description and action and dialogue. Sorry for the super long comment haha, but by far one of my favorite stories now, I'm so excited to see what happens.

Ugh Noa is being such a creep, I am so ready for Isla to knock him on his ass or something lol. Poe and Isla is so cute, and Jules was adorably supportive and a good friend. Push Isla to go out there and take what is hers!! haha

I am absolutely in love with this story, and I'm only on chapter 4. I'm so sad I have to go to work because I just want to binge read this! Poe is so sweet and endearing, and Isla is so cute and dynamic and strong willed, I love them! Wonderful job!

One I am so excited that you updated twice that is so exciting!!!
I still dont trust Noa!! How do men not realize when woman are completely uncomfortable. Unbelievable. i'm glad Poe wasn't so mad when she got to explain to him in a rational thoughts.

!!!!! This was beyond cute! the way poe acted with her and ahhh. I wonder how Jules is going to take to the news! Hell even Noa!

Oh Isla so silly, so blind lol. Poe is being the upmost punchable cute guy ever lol. Like we all know she didn't even think of him grabbing her cause she was so worried about the person who was hurt! So cute the both of them, being so stubborn.

a filler but still shedding the first layers of friendship. I enjoyed the chapter.

Poor Isla gonna have a heart attack.

Aww they are going through their little tiff right now, I hope they could get past it. And I hope Poe learned from his smart remarks that not everyone will like them. Gotta get burn to learn a lesson.

Maaaaaan Noa is being mad suspicious he's like boarder line seeming more like a spy than a dude that has a crush on Isla!!! Also I love how you have Poe's humor down perfectly. I can't wait for more!! :D

This everything I wanted and didn't know that I needed. I loved Poe so much! I'm so glad someone is writing a Poe fic and Isla is so adorable!!