March 8th, 2016 at 06:11am
Rain - Comments
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I love the layout. Super simple and doesnt distract from the story. This story is a bummer, it made me super sad. It was worded so elegantly and was just amazing.March 2nd, 2016 at 09:00pm
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@ dawn of light
Thanks lovely
March 1st, 2016 at 04:10am -
you are literally the queen of amazing drabbles/one-shots
capturing the raw emotion while using little words is your thing!March 1st, 2016 at 03:20am
A simple layout that makes me think of rain clouds. But I love the summary
Chapter 1: and if only
Just by the title of the chapter alone, I feel sad. The word if never implies for a good or happy tale.
Ugh, I was right. Sad. Very sad. I love the rain. It makes me feel at peace. It makes me feel alone and okay in my aloneness. But I feel her sorrow and feel so sorry for her.
You pack quite a punch with so few words and you are wonderful at painting pictures with your words as well. This is wonderful!