To Be Free - Comments

this is beautiful. absolutely beautiful on all accounts of life. bc it is the small things that make up for every little piece of imperfection during our time on this earth. being one that's normally lost & set apart from the norm, i could feel the depth of power in all these little words & attract myself to them like a moth to a flame.

This was honestly one of my favorite stories. I wrote something sort of similar to this & I loved where yours was taken. I love how simple the layout is as well, makes it easy to read for me and that's something I like when reading something. The summary was simple, and it got me curious to see what this story about. A simple quote had me interested to find out what this story was about. I mean with how this story ended, anything could happen afterwards. You could write a follow up to this if you wanted. It makes me curious to see what happened to them after that party. But great job doll. I enjoyed it.