Generally fan fictions are not my thing. It's not that I'm totally against them, I just feel that it is very hard to capture a character's personality that we can actually see (if we follow the fandom) on a week-to-week or season-to-season basis. Since we see them everyday we have an expectation for the character placed in our head. On the other hand fan fictions make it easier for the reader to visualize everything. All that aside, I actually really liked this. It might be because it includes two fandoms that I happen to follow for the most part. I thought that I could also picture myself as a fly on the wall watching Emma and Dean meet and also Dean and his pie. You captured the personality of Dean that I see on television weekly, which as I kind of pointed out above is a difficult thing to do. Even though right now this story is a simple story, its very well defined and I can see it going in many different direction. I will most definitely be subscribing to this and hope to see you write more of soon. I really commend you on sucking me into my very first fan fiction that I will subscribe to.
April 14th, 2016 at 09:25pm
Deany-baby and his pie. I should've guessed that that's how it'd all begin. 
I can't wait! The banner is amazing and the layout is beautiful. (Emma be reminding me of Felicity from Arrow 