Pacte - Comments

There is such a difference between the previous story and this one! You've definitely grown into your own voice. I love the revival. Definitely need to update soon! Food for thought though, instead of placing two main characters in one story why not give each character their own book. It's hard to follow two main characters with two different build ups.

Yay finally a chapter! It must suck that the manger has just left everything to you :(

Woo loved that update, its good how you are putting her mum more into the story this time around. hope Uni doesn't suck to much :)
Cant wait for the next one!

I just read both the story's that this one is connected to and i loved all of them i really cant wait for you to update!!

update

this is alot more detailed than the last, I like it