Criminal Love - Comments

  • saegusa.

    saegusa. (105)

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    AAAAH WHY DIDN'T I SEE THIS BEFORE GAHEYGBEYSGB. what better way to celebrate mark's 12mil than by reading a new fic of yours, eh? tehe

    already, i love that you're painting your setting and jack's predicament so clearly. i feel so bad for the little bean, agh, it sucks that he's going through so much. i really hope that this job works out for him - and he's upset about disappointing his mother, AAAAH what a sweet baby, this is so unfair. Cry

    their diction is so amusing, i love reading their accents tehe HE DOES jack looks like a baby. lmfao and you gave the bartender a legit, authentic irish name, which is wonderful. you're really doing good with keeping everything in order and putting me in the moment; i love it. and jack is so happy that he's managed to get a job! he's so proud of himself and i'm so proud of him and OH HI A STRIPPER POLL........no i'm not thinking of mark and danny and arin and pole dancing lessons what

    OHUSE OH HI IT'S A GAY BAR WITH A STRIPPER POLE THAT JACK IS NOW WORKING AT. AWHOOPS. SORRY JACKABOY. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ there's no such thing as a coincidence in a fic, honbun. so sorry.

    a long night....try a long experience of eventual good times and wild times and I'M EXCITED FOR THIS OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS i can't wait for more of it. In Love
    March 23rd, 2016 at 07:39pm