a) I see definite potential in this! you've got me hooked! b) I'm seeing a few spelling errors- not a big deal, just a pet peeve of mine! but seriously! definite potential!!
I loved the new chapter, although it's definitely going to get darker soon I can tell, especially with those creepy texts and calls she keeps getting! Update soon!
@ everythingburns This warms my heart! Thank you very, very much for your comment! It really means a lot :D You'll find out more soon! And I followed you back!
Oh dear... so I was looking through the stories page today and came across this story and now I'm OBSESSED. This is great!! And then I recognised your username and you read my story too which is so funny!
But seriously, I love this. I love that so far it's quite lighthearted but I can tell that it is going to get quite serious soon...especially with her ex husband coming back into the picture. I love that Norman is so protective of her already. My favourite parts are when he's sort of showing her off to the other cast members and the public, but still kind of keeping it a secret. I'd love to see more of them sneaking around away from the public... I'd hate to know what his crazy fans will be like when they find out more about her. Maybe the crazy fangirls are mean about her and Norman has to be quite protective over her again? I don't know!
@ Beckwah123 Thank you! I enjoyed writing this part of the story.
Also, I have most of the story already written! So I'll be updating once or twice a day as long as I have chapters to post. Hopefully I won't get writers block and can continue to do it this way, haha!