Alleyways - Comments

  • AngelicWasteland;

    AngelicWasteland; (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    I love the description you use in this! It's extremely well written for something so short and it held my attention from start to finish!
    May 11th, 2016 at 01:35pm
  • swell

    swell (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Australia
    Hey! I'm here to judge your entry for my drabble contest!

    Firstly I have to say I love the effect of the faded title against the image, it's such a cool effect and it's so fitting for the photo.

    I love this. Firstly, I love that you've written it to be 100 words, I find that can be hard to achieve, but you've pulled it off so well with how descriptive and eloquent this is. I love that even though I don't know who Bucky is, I feel like I have some sense of him with the short amount of words you've written. This flowed so so well. I have no criticisms to make. This piece fit the image great and though I wasn't sure what I was expecting with this image, I'm pleased that you've managed to surprise me.

    Thank you for entering my contest!
    April 29th, 2016 at 06:09pm
  • archipelago.

    archipelago. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    88
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    I adore Bucky. I wish it hadn't been a drabble, because I loved it and need more. But I'm going to subscribe to the sequel!
    You're description was wonderful, and the fact you've set a scene and captured some of Bucky's inner turmoil in 100 words is amazing.
    March 28th, 2016 at 11:06pm
  • gipsy danger.

    gipsy danger. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    97
    Location:
    United States
    Hail

    Oh wow, I loved this! How you managed to get so much emotion within one hundred words is absolutely amazing! My heart always hurts for Bucky, always. He doesn't deserve anything that has happened to him!
    Amazing!
    March 28th, 2016 at 03:59pm