Loved the intro to it honey! Can't wait to see more!
April 30th, 2016 at 02:11pm
The introduction was so good. I'm getting super excited now!
The gif for Ace makes her look badass (also the fact that her name is Ace!), and I'm stoked to see what happens! The second sentence seemed a little long, so maybe a comma is missing somewhere in there. 
I don't know, I'm terrible with commas, I use too much or too little. 