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  • dogandbutterfly

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    Ha, I was so distracted by the new James story that I never did comment on this one. DUH. Great ending, so glad they won (and James had the assist, I'll settle for that one). Just the perfect ending. Smile
    September 29th, 2016 at 07:12pm
  • Pittfan22

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    Sooooo much loveee!!!!
    September 29th, 2016 at 04:58am
  • FootieJo

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    It's fiction and your story so they can win if you want it. and I'm glad you had them win. perfect end.
    September 28th, 2016 at 11:32pm
  • Jimothy Cricket

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    I'm SOOO glad you decided to have them win. Like you metioned, the last line was totally worth it. Perfect ending to a great story. You should be proud of yourself, friend.

    And you sneaky, sneaky bastard! You're the BEST for that goal. Hehehehehe.
    Also for my own pleasure, I pictured some of the guys falling off the bench when they won because why not? That will never get old.  And leave it to Riley to miss the goal after everything. I feel her pain, though. Happens all the time to me as yo you know.

    Hopefully the real season ends this way. Unless my boys in red and black end it this way, but ha! I'm dreaming.
    September 28th, 2016 at 11:29pm
  • Jimothy Cricket

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    "Do we have to keep them if they're baby sisters?" - BAHAHAHAHA. Don't worry buddy, maybe you'll have some boys to play with soon(ish). Baby Josi has to grow a little more.

    Shea and Riley make my heart hurt. Oww.

    "Does it get any better than this?" - Yes, yes it does. It comes in the form a win with a comfortable lead so there is no need to want tp pop an entire bottle of xanax and down a bottle of wine....Or two.
    September 28th, 2016 at 03:47am
  • dogandbutterfly

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    Hey, the best thing about being the author is that you can write things the way you want them to be! I agree with the comment below, please let them win. And let James score the winning goal. So excited and so sad for the ending at the same time...but at least I'm not crying in front of the boss. I guess that'll be on Wednesday... Sad I can't wait for the James story (go figure) but I'm dreading the sadness, too. Darn you, playing with my emotions like this!! Wink
    September 27th, 2016 at 03:19pm
  • xxoomwauhzxxoo

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    Please let them win! Everyone needs this so badly. This might be the last hockey game Quinn ever watches Sad Sad
    September 27th, 2016 at 05:57am
  • hockeychick16

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    "James actually told me that if I didn't stop crying he was going to the arena four hours early" hahah I loved that line! The moment between Shea and Riley was perrrrrfect, and beautiful. Can't wait to see Riley's moment with Shea when she sees him for the first time after he's won the cup ;)
    September 26th, 2016 at 11:56pm
  • Thatmom

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    Crazy. Unrealistic. Emotional. Yup! I love it like this!!!
    September 26th, 2016 at 11:02pm
  • Jimothy Cricket

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    I smiled reading this whole thing. Well, almost all if it. The Quinn thing made me sad.

    So, everything is ending on me and im like, "WHAT IS HAPPENING?!"

    Ps, god bless Noah and his insane cuteness and awesomeness.
    September 26th, 2016 at 12:14am
  • dogandbutterfly

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    I can't believe there's only one chapter left...I'm totally not ready for the end of the story -- or of Quinn. I think if I see you update this while I'm at work, I'll wait to read it at home. No, wait, then I'll have to explain the crying to my husband. Maybe work is better. My boss would be afraid to ask me about it! ha ha
    September 25th, 2016 at 05:08pm
  • madds1234

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    OMG THE END IS HERE
    September 24th, 2016 at 09:37am
  • xxoomwauhzxxoo

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    These last few chapters have punched me right in the feels! I can't believe she's really not going to make it! I think it was definitely the saddest chapter with Noah. But I'm torn between being happy that it ends when Quinn dies and being really sad because I really love everyone in this story!
    September 23rd, 2016 at 10:54pm
  • dogandbutterfly

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    SO sad...but you did a great job (as always!). I'm going to go in a corner and cry now until the boss gets here...
    September 22nd, 2016 at 02:45pm
  • Jimothy Cricket

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    200!!
    2-0-0
    The big 2 0 0
    GO YOU!
    CONGRATS!!!!

    UGH. I was OK reading this until Noah asked if she needed fighters. You got me right in the feels so i was a big ball of emotions after that. So really, I hate you.

    "I'm not ready for this." - SAME. My God. It's gonna be BRUTAL!

    Sorry this sucked as a 200th comment but I'm SO proud of yooouuuu!!!
    September 22nd, 2016 at 05:21am
  • Jimothy Cricket

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    Ok, I couldn't take it anymore. It was driving me nuts as you know. SO since this wouldn't be a total waste...

    You're awesome
    I love this story
    Shea has a nice dimple and hair
    And he should let me play with his dogs
    September 22nd, 2016 at 05:21am
  • Pittfan22

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    I shed actual tears... That was so sad
    September 22nd, 2016 at 04:13am
  • madds1234

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    Sad Sad Sad
    September 22nd, 2016 at 12:16am
  • hockeychick16

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    So I forgot about your warning about the Quinn and Noah moment, so I read this after my class/on the bus... CRIED on the bus. Dang, that was hard to read
    September 21st, 2016 at 11:39pm
  • saramichelle_

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    Currently sitting in class crying because I couldn't wait to get home to read this. Right in the heart.
    September 21st, 2016 at 10:40pm