December 3rd, 2016 at 12:55am
@ Alex Moore.
Thanks for checking out my story!
A drag mother is just like a mentor figure who helps out new performers. There are all kinds of "rules" and different ideas and stigma and social cues that go into different relationships in the drag community. From my experience, it is widely looked down on to hook up with members of your family. I don't have a problem with it personally, haha (except my mother, who is like a big brother to me outside of drag) and a lot of people don't but yeah .
The story will dive more into the drag social scene and the politics in future chapters that haven't been posted yet. Thanks again!
We're introduced to Molly and Grace and it would help if you described them as the scene in the dressing room unfolds. I believe Molly is the taller one so maybe her long legs get tangled up in a feather boa, for example, or tell me how Grace has to tilt her head up to kiss her. I just want to be able to imagine them in my mind the way that you want me to as soon as possible.
I didn't see any major grammatical errors which always makes me so happy.
I was really thinking that they could've gotten away with it this one time but those pesky boxers! I really hope everything works out for Grace aka David. And I hope I get to see Alex grow into a more decent human being.