His Assistant - Comments

this was great! So happy you're continuing the story!!!

This story is pretty good so far! I really like the new aspect of her being unhappily married and then a rich business man swoops to save the day. But he's mysterious, which I really like.
A tip though, make sure you proof-read and edit your story before publishing the chapter. There have been a couple mistakes here and there in each chapter, ones easily fixed if the time was taken to edit them.
Other than that, looking forward to your next update!