June 3rd, 2016 at 12:20pm
this is so hilariously quizilla-cliche and I love it
also, my middle school (aka peak usage of quizilla) boyfriend's last name was DeSimone, so this is even more hilarious
TOO GOOD
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Okay, I'm already looking forward to this because just the summary had me rolling. She likes to compare him to space I was like aw, and then I read the second line and started laughing. I can already tell I'm going to enjoy this.
Kirk Desimone
It's hilarious that this started out with a prayer. If this is a high school romance then wowie, it'll fit the super cliche bit completely.
SHE HAS A MOTORCYCLE?! I've never heard anyone compare someone's eyes to an asteroid. I'm trying to decide if that's really romantic or not, lolol.
The end of the chapter was such a cringe fest, but it made me laugh, so I really appreciated it.
You Smell, Like, Good
I wouldn't know what to say to something like that either
I like how you do the A few hours later bit instead of actually melding that with the story. It's something I used to see a lot three or four years ago. It's a nice little touch.
THE LAST SENTENCE OF THIS CHAPTER WAS SO CHEESY, I ACTUALLY GROANED, OMG!
It's Not Really a SkillAgain, same
SO MUCH CRINGE INT HIS CHAPTER AND I LOVE IT!
Fictional
Kirk sounds super creepy. He just stayed out there and then knocked randomly when he heard Thalia talking about him D: I was literally
Overall
I thought this was really funny, tbh. I was shaking my head and facepalming throughout the entirety of it, but I think that's the point of a cliche contest, lolol. This was super good!