Headspace - Comments

@ lost tree;
You're welcome! And trust me I totally understand the struggle with writing and then not wanting to proofread right away!

@ mymomislysolcrazy
Thank you lol I honestly agree with you on the ending! I wrote it in like an hour and didn't even proofread it or anything I'll probably go back and re-edit it. But seriously thank you for the feedback! It is much appreciated!

I love the layout of this right off the bat. It sounds fabulous, I don't want to take any fault in it. I love the way it was written kind of like a poem, but in story form. I still am not sure about the ending. It was just as wonderful as the beginning, but I think overall the story shows what an abusive relationship is like. I think with the ending I thought it seemed a little less realistic I guess. It took me out of it because I feel as though since he has her heart it would be a little harder to walk away than just that. Overall this was a great story! Good job!