Kalameet - Comments

@ cleopatra.
Thanks a bunch for reading! I really appreciate the compliment. I hope you'll keep reading. :)

this is absolutely amazing. from the little you've given us in the first chapter, im absolutely hooked. you have a gorgeous way of combining words together & allowing your readers to envision the scene. starting from what he's wearing, to the horse he's riding, to the blunt force of this arrow slamming into him- it's perfection. great job on this.

@ disneyland.acid.trip
Well if this isn't normally your genre Hello and welcome to dark medieval fantasy madness! I personally haven't ever read much else haha. Thank you so very much for reading and I hope you stick around! There is definitely a bit of human-animal cooperation to be had (and more to come) if you like that sort of thing. Thanks again for the comment! Any feedback is good feedback :)

Okay, I won't lie, this isn't necessarily the genre I read very often but I adore this. Kalameet, first and foremost, is such an eye catching name. And there's a nice relationship for human/animal already and it's clear. Maybe I'm getting that wrong though, I'M SORRY THIS IS DIFFERENT FOR ME, but I really like it. And your vocabulary! My favorite thing, oh gosh. Some words I even had to look up, which I always enjoy. I just genuinely enjoyed this and I look forward to more!

@ dawn of light
Thanks so much for the comment! I might end up switching up the genre from adventure to horror depending on what route I go with the later content. Could go either way, so if you want the creeps/scary things you might just be in luck! Hope you stick around for more and I will do my best not to disappoint!

Your summary is brilliant! I definitely love how well it just gives the readers the creeps. As for the chapter itself, I can say that you have a nice way with words. I like the way you're describing your scenes because it's not too heavy but just right. I love the way you write about the atmosphere because I definitely felt a chill while reading this.

I thought the ending was smooth and not forced. I'm interested to see what happens to him next and to know more about creatures / scary things

Great job!

@ JurassicLover
Thanks so much! I'm excited too! ;)

This is pretty cool. I like this so far. I'm excited to see what happens next. :D

@ Divided
Thank you for catching that! I thought I had got all those! >:( haha. I haven't read that but I will have to check it out. I love a good action fantasy read.

I'm really glad you like it :) I hope you stick around. Please let me know if you notice any other wonkey mistakes!

I love your knowledgeable description and depiction of the scene as it unfolds. I really can't pinpoint a few sentences to quote because I loved all of the description!

Just one grammatical error I found while reading:

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The once still undergrowth came alive as a the beginnings of a battle broke out around him.

By the way, if you haven't read Gideon the Cutpurse/The Time Travelers before I'd like to recommend it to you. It has a similar theme to your story and I think you'd find it to be an enjoyable read.

Thanks for the enjoyable read! Eager to read more. (-: