Okay first of all, HELLO PREQUEL TO KIAN I CAN'T. And second of all, I love the summary because Grey's Anatomy. I'm gonna try my best not to be bias since you know Kian is one of my favourite stories.
I loved your descriptions through the whole thing. You know exactly where to describe and expand on things and where to leave sentences open for interpretation and it's really lovely to read. I like that the first chapter is Beth's POV and the second is Kian's, because we get to see their feelings towards each other even though Beth is dating John and it makes me want to scream at her.
The fact that Kian was the one talking about Grey's was the best. I just love his character, he's so sweet and adorable. I really want to know who was doing the catching when he passed out Also, I like how you worked the prompts into the story. It didn't feel predictable or cliche which I really loved.