Portraits of Red - Comments

@ Archives of Pain
You're welcome. I've done the same thing so I completely understand.

@ RFarley1991
Thank you for pointing them out. I rewrote prts of the story and changed the names after I was finished.

I really liked your story, but there were a couple mistakes I noticed. There's one spot where Richard tells George to have a good time, but you call him Chris. And there's a couple of times when you called Daniel Devin. There's a couple of word mistakes like using the word him instead of home; using come instead of cum. Besides those, it was really well written and a very interesting story.