So ive seen this story floating around mibba, clicked on it a few times and just never got around to reading it. It was one of those 'should I?" Moments. But I have to have that I actually really like it, the Original character seems very string and stubborn. I can deny that it is a little confusing to me but I will get used to it. rakken (did I get it right) is a right git, I mean seriously who leaves a woman stranded in space. What a jerk. There was a part in the beginning of chapter five where you repeated a sentence which threw me off for a quick second, but other then that I didnt really See any errors. I can't wait to see where this is going, keep up the great work.
June 28th, 2016 at 09:35pm