The Broken Glader - Comments

Only the first chapter in and I love that last line! Oh my goodness! It's so beautiful! And the layout is on fleek

To be honest, I've never seen the Maze Runner (I think that is what this story is about, yeah?) But your writing is so pretty, I have to continue whether I know exactly who is who or not!

i am not a maze runner fan @ all to say the least, but i do have utmost respect for you for have turned something so simple into an amazing thing. now totally opposed to the books & movies (*eye rolls so hard the world flips over*) im very intrigued by your prologue, especially w/ your interesting choice of detail & description which isn't overbearing or distracting from the images @ hand.

the last paragraph's (maybe the last four let's say) is what really made me think of this as an original than a fan fic. so smooth & powerful that it makes you want to come back & figure out what really happened to that sixteen year old boy that had gone into the box as "damaged goods not broken"

wonderful choice of words, love! you may have just won me over.

Okay so I think I commented on the prologue before. *quickly checks* Yep, I did and like before, I'm amazed at the start of this story. How it really hooks me, drawing me in like a fish on a fishing rod (Ugh Such overdone and useless metaphor! I apologize for that. ), but seriously though you have such a great start! My favorite part is the end, this part:
The boy who went into the box, whoever he had been, was no more. The boy who emerged from the box was damaged goods, but not broken, definitely not broken – Just bruised.

Or so he told himself.

It's difficult to be broken when you are the glue.

It just sounds so powerful. I can't find anything wrong with the prologue so I'll end my comment with this:
You did an amazing job and I'm glad you're writing this story.

I really like this so far! I've never seen a Maze Runner fic before, but this is great! Update soon, please!

This was so awesome! Is the guy in the box Newt? Kinda excited and scared. Have no idea what's going on XD

Holy crap! That sounds so scary! Poor Newt! As usual, you start another awesome story, Stevie!

Fantastic start! I love this so much especially the quote at the end so very perfect update soon please

@ Bangarang!

Fellow Newt lovers unite!

I Love Newt! I honestly cannot wait for this!