My Heart Is His - Comments

@ She Said Poptarts
Thank you for the comment, I'm glad you liked it and I was really happy to take part in your contest :)

The layout is great; thank you for saving my eyes and having a white background with black text. Although I’m not a fan of comic sans, it didn’t change my view of the whole one shot!

This was def one of my favorites one shot throughout the contest, I just love how realistic the ending is, AND THE PASSIONATE DECLARATION IN THE CAFETERIA OMG, I seriously covered my face and it was just... gah! It was beautiful and I just it was exactly the way I imagined a passionate love declaration and yeah, it was great and made me smile like an idiot. I felt so bad for Ben and felt his embarrassment and his fear of losing his best friend. And Jacob!! Ugh, I got mad at him because like… BRO, SHE CHEATED ON YOU THREE TIMES??? Where’s your head at? I do love how you made him contact Ben multiple times, and his little ‘declaration’ of his first thought being Ben. That was a nice touch and it made me happy for Ben.

This was exactly the kind of love declaration that I had in mind when I made the contest.