April 14th, 2020 at 10:17pm
oh lisa, this is gorgeous
the aching tenderness between the two of them? and the soft longing. my heart was actually in my throat when Brandon showed up with fucking deployment papers like good god. And you were able to give us all of that longing and soft ease of summer in this lovely little slice of life. Just this little glimpse into these two's lives. and in second person!!! fucking wow second person is so hard to get right but I can't imagine reading this any other way.
this is exquisite, and i love you dearly.
PAIGE oh my gosh stop being so wonderful. But don’t <3
thank you so so so much. I’m definitely writing more!
this was a new pov for me and I don’t know how the next piece
will be written. I usually just go with the flow!