Cease Fire - Comments

Please please please continue this story!!!

can't wait to read more!

I love this!

It's a great story. Please update soon!!!

Great chapter!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! <3

@ Dezi Demize
Thank you <3
I will try my best. It's been a while. :)

Please update!!!

This story sounds so amazing so far!!! Updates soon please!!!

Damn, Shads is a complete douche, I hate him >:(
The poor girl... Fuck that guy.
I hope Selene can get away from him...even though I have a feeling she won't. She don't need that asshole! D:<
For him to hurt a woman like that makes me sick.
Grrr.

And as for chapter 3, still a douche, nothing changes.
Really, why you say such mean things to that poor girl? I outta shove my fist up yo ass and pull your stomach through your asshole >:(
Holy shit, that crazy bitch is psycho!
Yeah Selene, you shut that bitch up. Man I love that woman, can I marry her? Lol

I want more to read, dammit! I'm addicted now! D:

@ RavenArtist93
Thank you.

Glad to see you back in action :D

The way you described this female character was very sad. It is heart wrenching to know her lifestyle right before all of those horrible things happened. Michael is an absolute a-hole. Like ew, I'm glad he got what was coming for him. Like that entire rape scene was so chilling. It was as if I was watching it happen before my eyes. Very well done. And damn, Shads seems like a douche haha.

I'll be excited to read more lovely! Glad to see you writing again and as always, this looks amazing! :D

P.S: Where's the haven story? LOL JK, I'm not like those other jerks haha. :P

@ marliesevenfold
Oh my, thank you. I really didn't expect to get a comment this quickly.
I'm super glad that you liked it. I hope to update tomorrow.

Wowza!!
I've read a lot of your stories before and I was hoping that you would be back. I'm so glad that you are! This is already starting off pretty graphic I mean, holy shit balls that rape scene was so intense. I started crying when I read it, OMG Selene :,,,,(. Annnnnnd.....Shadows seems pretty hardcore right now I mean WOW O.O!!! That death scene was sooooo on point!! I wonder ... is he really going to kill her?! :,,,,(. I hope not.

DIE MICHAEL!!! YOU NASTY FUCKERrr!!

Pwease update again sooon!!!