Damn, Shads is a complete douche, I hate him >:( The poor girl... Fuck that guy. I hope Selene can get away from him...even though I have a feeling she won't. She don't need that asshole! D:< For him to hurt a woman like that makes me sick. Grrr.
And as for chapter 3, still a douche, nothing changes. Really, why you say such mean things to that poor girl? I outta shove my fist up yo ass and pull your stomach through your asshole >:( Holy shit, that crazy bitch is psycho! Yeah Selene, you shut that bitch up. Man I love that woman, can I marry her? Lol
The way you described this female character was very sad. It is heart wrenching to know her lifestyle right before all of those horrible things happened. Michael is an absolute a-hole. Like ew, I'm glad he got what was coming for him. Like that entire rape scene was so chilling. It was as if I was watching it happen before my eyes. Very well done. And damn, Shads seems like a douche haha.
I'll be excited to read more lovely! Glad to see you writing again and as always, this looks amazing! :D
P.S: Where's the haven story? LOL JK, I'm not like those other jerks haha. :P
Wowza!! I've read a lot of your stories before and I was hoping that you would be back. I'm so glad that you are! This is already starting off pretty graphic I mean, holy shit balls that rape scene was so intense. I started crying when I read it, OMG Selene :,,,,(. Annnnnnd.....Shadows seems pretty hardcore right now I mean WOW O.O!!! That death scene was sooooo on point!! I wonder ... is he really going to kill her?! :,,,,(. I hope not.