I can honestly say that I would keep reading this well into the night if there were more chapters. The fact that it's a werewolf story makes me even more desperate to read more of it. You're really good, so please don't stop writing. :D
I agree, I didn't know that your story was a werewolf story until you mentioned that it was. I wish I was as detailed a writer as you, for some reason I get stuck on dialogue. I also agree that Fallon is an awesome name, especially for a werewolf. :D Can't wait for an update!!
Wow, I was amazed by your story. It's quite nicely detailed as well! And of course you deserve more than a 'Good job,' deary. :) I say that you've done a great job with this beautiful werewolf story. And yes, I certainly haven't read a story that starts off so differently. ^.^ I have a confession: I hadn't realized that it was even a Werewolf story until I read your Aunthor's not at the bottom! XD Anyway, I loved how you have written about the Valerie's(sp?) and her mother's loss, their grief, and everything. Beautiful story! I cannot wait for the update! :D
You're really good, so please don't stop writing. :D