Warmness on the Soul. - Comments

Whhhhyyyyy is there not more?! I loved this chapter. You did so well introducing characters and planting seeds to connect relationships between characters. It's so nice to see you so indulged in something like this again. Love it!

I didn't get the chance to comment before but you're really doing well at descriptions and progressing the story now. You're really getting good at getting very personal with your characters. Great job and very well done.

I love it! Love the style of writing you're going for here. Can't wait to find out what happens!