I really really enjoyed reading this! Its different yet very simple with how the dialogue is :D I love that you made this a mystery right form the start it honestly seemed like I was seeing a film in my head as I was reading. I like the the girls are all close with each other seeing the friendship right there. I'm really curious about where this goes because now there is two bodies D: I can't wait! You did a really really good job at this.
I am just so into this whole... tone ? Aesthetic ? I don't even know the right word for it. Whatever. Rich kid death club thing hahaha. But yeah, this is wonderful. Definitely here for this.