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  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    It's good that she has someone to be there for her, since she's shutting out the people from "before". Dillon seems sweet. I hope he can help her.
    August 22nd, 2018 at 12:20am
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    Yayyyyyyyy!!!!!! Crazy You updated!!!

    Lila is such a supportive bestie! But dude, guys in Speedos? No thanks. Lol. Jennifer is a bitch. God, that is totally fucked up. I'm not going to say she shouldn't let Jennifer get to her; we both know Alexis is better than that twat! Loved it!
    October 18th, 2017 at 03:38am
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    Oh, Lexi.... Sad At least Dillon is there. He can save her ass since Lila is being kept in the dark.
    April 1st, 2017 at 04:24am
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    Don't you roll your eyes when your bestie texts you, missy! Lol.

    Oh boy. Alexis has definitely begun the downward spiral, and that makes me very unhappy. Sad She needs someone to talk to and I hate that it can't be family or friends, though I do understand it.
    February 18th, 2017 at 10:06pm
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    lmfao Lila's texts are the best!

    Dillon seems nice. And Mark is a fuck stick. And I still hate that his name is Mark, BTW. But anyway, it's good that the students have something to talk about besides Zayne's death. I think Alexis would have been fine (for real) if it hadn't been for the principal. I understand why he asked her, but...

    Interested to see how this unfolds.
    February 5th, 2017 at 06:53am
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    I wish I was as cool as Lila in real life. Lol.

    Oh, no. Alexis shouldn't even listen to Lila's offhand comments, but I know she just wants to stop the pain, both physical and mental. Her dad sucks, the students at school suck, and the only people I love are Alexis and Lila...and Alexis's mom, because she understands it wasn't Alexis's fault and that they still have a child that is alive. Update more often!
    January 22nd, 2017 at 12:51am
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    I can't imagine her parents would actually be disappointed, but I can understand Alexis' thought process. Lila is being the best friend she can be, trying to help Alex through the guilt and grief, but of course I'm sure she's going about it the wrong way. I'm in serious need of something happy now, ma'am! (Imagine my stern face. Grr.)
    December 19th, 2016 at 03:50am
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    It was a gentle reminder, wasn't it? Lol.

    So...this. Cry I have no words. I mean, it's just so unfair! And I hated the way she found out, though I guess it could have been worse.

    I can't wait for the next one! Hope you have better luck writing than I've had lately.
    November 27th, 2016 at 03:55am
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    Lila is such a bad ass! Boom, bitch! I hate that Alex's ex is named Mark, though. Lol. Zayne sounds like an amazing brother. I'm torn up knowing what is going to happen... Sad
    October 8th, 2016 at 10:21pm
  • BelovedSyn

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    :O I've been absent for like A LONG TIME, and your is the first that has me hooked. I mean, i have always loved your stories, but I'm excited for this. I really like the idea behind this, and I already like the two characters you have shown, but really don't want to lose Zayne haha!
    August 24th, 2016 at 05:16pm
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    @ PhenoBarbiDoll
    I've been too excited to post it! I let a friend at work read it and now she's hooked haha.

    @ Bangarang!
    I've had this idea in my head for so long but I'm just too excited to actually get it going now!
    August 12th, 2016 at 04:40am
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    I've been waiting for this one!!!!!!! Crazy
    August 12th, 2016 at 04:29am
  • Bangarang!

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    Okay you have a great to this story and I am very excited to see where you take it. The relationship between Zayne and Alexis is adorable and I have a feeling my heart is going to ripped out of my chest soon. Either way I am excited for your next update :D
    August 12th, 2016 at 04:18am