CUTE. the first thing I think when I read the first three lines is, “wow damn that’s smooth”
I love the way you wrote about Stiles. I feel like you really captured his character from the show–especially from the way he stuttered–with his conversation. I liked that it was somewhat light despite another creature in Beacon. I liked that the beginning conversations was very light and sweet; something needed at a time of distress Stiles and the rest of fam are in. Liked that a lot
Of course I liked that Lydia and rest of the gang made it into this. I liked that their tones seemed very smooth. The appearance of the gang made this more three dimensional and realistic (for a school environment). I enjoyed that Stiles personality was nicely laid out, if that makes sense. Readers get a nice grasp of who Stiles is by just one sentence said by him!
I liked that you included both cute and stress moments in this It really reflects how high school, despite the whole vampire thing, is both a worry and chill place. I am beyond sorry this comment came so late. You had a great entry!!
I love the way you wrote about Stiles. I feel like you really captured his character from the show–especially from the way he stuttered–with his conversation. I liked that it was somewhat light despite another creature in Beacon. I liked that the beginning conversations was very light and sweet; something needed at a time of distress Stiles and the rest of fam are in. Liked that a lot
Of course I liked that Lydia and rest of the gang made it into this. I liked that their tones seemed very smooth. The appearance of the gang made this more three dimensional and realistic (for a school environment). I enjoyed that Stiles personality was nicely laid out, if that makes sense. Readers get a nice grasp of who Stiles is by just one sentence said by him!
I liked that you included both cute and stress moments in this