Lovely update as per usual. I love that Nik caught her look and said something. The dynamics between the characters is so believeable. Can't say it enough. It's funny, the older you get the more you realize that time is irrelevant. Yes Charlie just met Austin-but I feel like what she is going through is beautifully captured in your writing. There's this strong connection that they share and she's trying to rationalize it to herself. Love it!!!
Each chapter of this keeps getting cuter and cuter!!! How is that humanly possible? I'm loving this small moments between them. It feels so realistic when two people are falling for each other. I love this story so much. I have fears though that when it comes to meeting dad, stuff is going to get tough between them.
Just read chapter five!!! I loved the description of the room she shares with Jesse. It's absolutely incredible writing! It gives a strong look inside of our characters. The state of a room definitely tells a lot about a person. I enjoy the slow, sluggish day she was hoping to have. The writing captured that mood perfectly!
This is super cute! I feel you really capture the introverted personality amazingly well with Charlie! Love, love the cute vibe this story is putting out. I want to watch the reverse happen. Where somehow, her friends convince Austin to come over for dinner or something and you watch Charlie just squirm under the fact that her friends and Austin are in the same room together.