Great update! I'm also glad you highlighted physical abuse on men by women, as it is not highlighted enough. It is very wrong and needs to be stopped. Men who suffer this kind of abuse are not weak. It is the women who are bullies.
It's funny, I'm totally noticing how similar Pixie is to a character named Demi in my story "Broken Arrow" haha. And I love that you brought Ivy's short brown hair in earlier this time, I think last time she didn't get it until the sequel. :)
Gahh, reading this is sending me right back to 2011 when I first found the original write-up on your old account. This series was definitely my favourite out of all your A7X stories back when. And I'm absolutely in love with Pixie, Pixie is great, Pixie is literally Me in a fucking nutshell. I adore her. Subscribed and keen to see this re-write progress. ^_^