Good with the gun - Comments

emoqueen94:

write more please *gets on ground and begs* i needa read more...i'm like a shark...i cant live unless i'm moving forward...but in this case...its moving forward in a story/book type thing lol...more please?

I have never heard anything more accurate in my life! So, come one, update soon!

write more please *gets on ground and begs* i needa read more...i'm like a shark...i cant live unless i'm moving forward...but in this case...its moving forward in a story/book type thing lol...more please?

shize!!!!!!!!! I love this story, I seriously can't wait for you to post more!

So I was reading. And I was obsessing because this story is bloody brilliant! And then...and then it stopped! Please update. I am saddened that there is no more new chapters for me to read yet...

thnx for the dedication :) you should keep going!!! are they gonna like...rape her or something? *has too many possibilities going through my head* lol

love it!
please update soon

write more. Rawr *sits waiting for there to be more* oh yeah, and if you need any more poems, i have some, but they are all about like...suicide and cutting...and there is one cool one about fire

keep going! i totally wanna read more...god, write more. dont make me come through the interweb and come get you!!!

I also really love the idea for this story. I would recommend working a bit on your mechanics. Some of your grammar is a little bit messy, but that's a problem most everyone has at some point. :) I look forward this story's progression!

i really like the idea for this :]
ich have subscribed (y)
xx

hmmmm I guess this is new, comment please!!