November 22nd, 2017 at 04:17am
Just the first paragraph alone was enough to really engulf me into this. I loved how you described her, comparing her to bright sun on freshly mowed grass, her freckles, flowers in her hair. The scent of peaches, toothpaste, and coffee. It was all so beautiful and I could envision her in my mind.
And the second paragraph was the same. You can tell someone is saying that with love and adoration, and that's something that I really enjoy about this. You can feel the love in the descriptions and imagery.
And, ahhh, the last paragraph was probably my favorite. The way it all came together was so lovely. This was such a beautiful piece and you captured so much love and imagery in something so short.
Like????
She was the scent of peaches lightly scattered across her neck and short poems written on wrinkled pieces of paper.
smh. This was just too simple, too beautiful, and just too good.