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  • Loves Light Blue

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    Oooooo things are getting cute! Loved it!! Can't wait for more!!
    September 19th, 2016 at 01:56am
  • InMyOwnWorld

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    Totally in love with your writing. It's as I was reading a published novel. Really hope you'll keep posting in the future. I wish I wrote half as well as you do *consider that English is not my first language...*
    September 6th, 2016 at 05:21am
  • Loves Light Blue

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    Yay! I'm glad you updated! THis chapter was so sweet!
    September 1st, 2016 at 08:44pm
  • My_Little_Hobby

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    @ Loves Light Blue
    Was it up to par??
    August 24th, 2016 at 08:20pm
  • Loves Light Blue

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    I. Love. This! I cannot wait for more!! And I can't wait to see who else is coming over!
    August 22nd, 2016 at 11:45am
  • My_Little_Hobby

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    Thank you for your comment :) I do my best to proofread before I post any stories online, but sometimes things slip through. I agree that there are not enough Hemsworth stories on here, which is part of the reason why I decided to do one in the first place. Well, that, and the fact that Chris is a beautiful human being :)
    August 21st, 2016 at 06:24pm
  • kipderder

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    Definitely not enough Hemsworth stories on here, so I'm always excited to see a new one. Nice first chapter. Correct spelling, grammar, punctuation; all things my perfectionist mind likes to nitpick about. My only question is, how did Emery not swoon over his gorgeous face and accent? Can't wait to see how this will play out, so I hope you keep writing.
    August 21st, 2016 at 06:15pm