November 6th, 2017 at 01:55am
Flecks of Sun - Comments
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I'm sad her relationship with her father is kinda strained at the moment. I'm happy she's with Ville though and hopefully he can make her feel better ;)September 26th, 2017 at 11:51pm
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You're too kind. I'll have more updates by the end of the day.September 25th, 2017 at 08:32am
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Ugh, my heart! You have such a way with words! This story means the world to me and I love it so much. I'm so happy to have gotten two updates, and I know it's selfish but I want more! Thank you for such a beautiful storySeptember 23rd, 2017 at 06:21pm
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@ kdennis9
merci, merci. feedback good or bad always helpsSeptember 23rd, 2017 at 01:42pm -
Ahhhh!!!!! I need more immediately!September 23rd, 2017 at 12:48pm
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Ahh my mind is spinning from the end of this chapter!!!! I freaking love your story!!January 14th, 2017 at 11:56am
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Major cliff hanger. Hope to see an update soon.January 11th, 2017 at 02:35pm
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How could you leave me hanging like this? Such cruelty!!!! Loved the update. I hope she's alright and they can be reunited soonJanuary 10th, 2017 at 04:23pm
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@ kdennis9
Really? Wow! Thank you :)January 6th, 2017 at 12:50am -
I absolutely love this story so much. I've spent my entire class period reading and I'm hooked. I cant wait for the next update <3January 5th, 2017 at 08:14pm
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Love this so far and happy to see more frequent updatesOctober 29th, 2016 at 12:04am
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I loved the new chapter! especially the phone conversation! 'this is your gentleman caller'. I seriously couldn't stop laughing! I could literally feel her embarrassment!!!!!!October 19th, 2016 at 09:58am
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@ Carebears_rawrr23
Thank you. :)October 18th, 2016 at 12:34pm -
I love this story!!! update it please!October 16th, 2016 at 09:05am
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I will have a looong chapter up tonight. So sorry for an unexpected delay. i had an impromptu trip for work and have not had a chance to wrap up the second chapter. Thanks for the feedback so far.August 31st, 2016 at 12:28pm
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I have no idea how I ended up here but good thing I did. While it does feel a bit weird that a celebrity would just talk to a fan like that, it's fun to read a story where the famous person is just so straight forward and approaches a fan rather than the clichéd ways of other fanfics.
I love your descriptions of Finland and her backstory about her grandfather and all. I also love it that this is so not American centric as a lot of stories in here.
The relationship between Emile and Ville seems pretty funny and light hearted, I'm really curious to know where this is going.
The only suggestion is that you run this through spell/grammar check because I did spot a couple of super minor mistakes/typos but no big deal.
Great job!August 30th, 2016 at 06:01pm -
Very funny :D! Hope you update soonAugust 28th, 2016 at 10:22am
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@ Laura81
Thanks! Will do. Will have another update later today. Feedback always helps.August 27th, 2016 at 05:21am -
It's good so far:) please make looong chapters and a lot of them and please finish the story.
That's how much I like your writing so far :)August 27th, 2016 at 03:15am
Keep up the good work!