Flecks of Sun - Comments

I enjoy this so much. The relationships and feelings are developing well!

Keep up the good work!

I'm sad her relationship with her father is kinda strained at the moment. I'm happy she's with Ville though and hopefully he can make her feel better ;)

You're too kind. I'll have more updates by the end of the day.

Ugh, my heart! You have such a way with words! This story means the world to me and I love it so much. I'm so happy to have gotten two updates, and I know it's selfish but I want more! Thank you for such a beautiful story

@ kdennis9

merci, merci. feedback good or bad always helps

Ahhhh!!!!! I need more immediately!

Ahh my mind is spinning from the end of this chapter!!!! I freaking love your story!!

Major cliff hanger. Hope to see an update soon.

How could you leave me hanging like this? Such cruelty!!!! Loved the update. I hope she's alright and they can be reunited soon

@ kdennis9
Really? Wow! Thank you :)

I absolutely love this story so much. I've spent my entire class period reading and I'm hooked. I cant wait for the next update <3

Love this so far and happy to see more frequent updates

I loved the new chapter! especially the phone conversation! 'this is your gentleman caller'. I seriously couldn't stop laughing! I could literally feel her embarrassment!!!!!!

@ Carebears_rawrr23
Thank you. :)

I love this story!!! update it please!

I will have a looong chapter up tonight. So sorry for an unexpected delay. i had an impromptu trip for work and have not had a chance to wrap up the second chapter. Thanks for the feedback so far.

I have no idea how I ended up here but good thing I did. While it does feel a bit weird that a celebrity would just talk to a fan like that, it's fun to read a story where the famous person is just so straight forward and approaches a fan rather than the clichéd ways of other fanfics.
I love your descriptions of Finland and her backstory about her grandfather and all. I also love it that this is so not American centric as a lot of stories in here.
The relationship between Emile and Ville seems pretty funny and light hearted, I'm really curious to know where this is going.
The only suggestion is that you run this through spell/grammar check because I did spot a couple of super minor mistakes/typos but no big deal.
Great job!

Very funny :D! Hope you update soon

@ Laura81
Thanks! Will do. Will have another update later today. Feedback always helps.

It's good so far:) please make looong chapters and a lot of them and please finish the story.
That's how much I like your writing so far :)