September 3rd, 2016 at 05:52pm
@ discoveringclouds
Thanks for commenting, it means a lot.
I'll start with the hatchet part. Is it not normal for people to have hatchets by their beds? I have one, not for self defense, but it does fit there. Also, his hands were stained with blood, after crying over his love.
He was only brought in for questioning because of how suspicious he looked even though there was no blood on the hatchet, and the cops were probably told they heard gun shots. Nobody said they were good at their jobs.
I'm aware of the holes in my story. I was writing a story for a friend and it was getting really late, because of this I was very hesitant in posting it. I also wanted the reader to use their imagination to fill in the holes. Kind of like when a story or a movie ends with a cliffhanger and it's up to you to theorize what you think will happen next. Something like that I guess.
Originally I wasn't even going to state whether the main character and the lover (I've forgotten her name) were male or female. That part happened by accident...
Your feedback has really helped me though, and I'll try harder in my next story. Thank you so much!
I wish the King and the Knights the best! Farewell.
We are glad to be of service! We hope to read your next tale.
Story writing always gets better with time. ;)
Farewell,
The Knights