September 4th, 2016 at 12:30am
Wow the story was awesome!
I'll have to say the part about the hookers was just nasty. Everything else was already so
Dirty and grimy in that area. I guess I always hold superheroes to a higher level of love. And he seems like a batman character.
My brain aches just thinking about all those stairs! I can practically smell how rancid all those new places are.
Seriously so descriptive. All the best in writing on!
Wow! Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the first chapter and hope you keep reading