Volanta - Comments

AH! MARRIED! YES! I am so glad. I am also glad that Pippa, Oliver and the crew are doing as the Volatians requested and keep their home quiet. Granted, the queen did threaten their lives. lol

I think this was a very well executed ending. I am not disappointed at all. Only disappointed that it is over. I am definitely very interested in the sequel and would love to read it once it surfaces.

Thank-you for writing!

I am very glad that Pippa and Oliver saved Volanta.

I am very interested to see what happens next whether you are going to close the story or keep going further with it. I don't know what to expect so I am interested to see what happens if you do continue writing it.

I hope Oliver reassures Pippa that he does really care for her.

Great update!

Okay I was never expecting the entire city of Volanta to fair when the heart was removed! That is so worrisome. Pippa better shoot the hell out of Peter and save Volanta!

I love the way you break up you chapters and leave us in suspense each time.

I can't believe how great this story is!!!!

I was waiting for this update to come!

Peter is an idiot and an asshole. Oliver is already outsmarting his impulsive plan. I really like the scenes between Pippa and Rena. I like their girl talk. I also like her nickname from Rena.

I am extremely looking forward to finding out how this situation unfolds! Great update. Can't wait for more!

Peter is such an ass. I can't stand him. Although I didn't even expect him to be smart enough to come up with such a conniving plan. I have been team Oliver since day one. I love the unexpected twist and cliffhangers you always leave us with.

Great update! :)

One thing I really like to do is picture Pippa's beautiful outfits in my head. And you describe them so well that I get a clear idea. I also love that you chose to make her a red head. Not many main characters are red heads anymore.

I am soooo happy that Pippa and Oliver finally had a little alone time in this chapter. It was long overdo! :)

I seriously cannot get enough of this and I can't wait for your next update.

I just wanted to stop by and say how much I LOVE this story please update soon!

I have been trying for DAYS to comment on this on my work computer but for some reason it has not been working.

Anyway, I adore this story. I am so glad Oliver finally came clean about his feelings for Pippa. I have been waiting for that moment to come.

I really enjoy the creativeness and uniqueness to this. Its unlike anything I have read. Lowkey reminds me of Avatar but there are very VERY few similarities.

Great job love and I look forward to reading more.

This has such good writing, ugh I'm jealous at the flow of it all. I love the characters and the dynamics between them. I haven't felt completely enveloped with a story on here for awhile, maybe because I write so much that I can't get past having a writers mind. But this has me feeling excited for them and seeing the things that they're seeing. Don't be a stranger to this story! I'll be so disappointed if you leave it out in the cold like some authors do. Keep up the awesomeness!

I'm going to come back and leave a proper comment on this. For now, I just have to say it's amazing!!!