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Also I want to add that I love the contrast between Brooklyn and Dannilynn. The leave me alone vs. save me mindset that really shows the kind of damage that Brooklyn suatained, and also the...jealousy, maybe?...that Dannilynn is still getting this attention even though she is long gone. I think it's amazing how you're conveying this.

You have absolutely no idea how excited I am to read this. I've been waiting to see if you would continue with Brooklyn's story and I'm so glad you decided to take this direction with it, because as someone who has had to deal with survivals guilt and the suicidal thoughts that came from it, and I am just so glad to see more about this family and the way that they work. I'm also optimistic that there will be a somewhat more positive ending to this, however your talent supersedes any desire I have. You can literally write that Brooklyn drowns herself in Dr. Pepper and I would be like "Wow, she did it again, made a great story!!!"

I'm so excited to see where this goes.

I also squealed when I saw you posted something new! Really glad to see you continued with this and I can't wait to read more.

Its weird seeing Brooklyn like this. Im use to the cute innocent cuddly person. Not this angsty, depressed, troublesome teenager. Im bracing myself for how Matt is. Yikes.

I may or may not have squealed when i saw that youd posted something new. Im not even ashamed to admit it.