All Night Long - Comments

@ RoCk_PrInCeSs_PR

I appreciate your feedback and thanks for pointing out the grammar mistake. It was meant to say "Hot as hell" but I must've read over it several times that I obviously missed it because I was concentrating too hard. I had written this one shot when I first started out writing so it's not one of my best when it comes to the speaking parts. My writing's changed a bit but I'll keep that in mind for any future stuff :)

Even though it was straight to the point I found this one shot to be very hot and fulfilling. Matt wanted one thing that night and managed to get it. Ciera, obviously looked for the same thing. There's nothing bad about a one night stand as long as people are careful, and use protection. In my opinion, I would have prefer to know a little more interaction between them in order to at least get to know each other on the course of the night before taking things to the hotel. Overall, this is an amazing one shot, and I loved it.

I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors, but I did noticed the following statement.

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she made them look hot as

I think if you want to make a comparison, the sentence needs a word in order to be complete.
Example: She made them look hot as hell.

Wow! That was smokin'!