Different for Girls - Comments

This piece is good.
Typically, I tend to navigate away from pieces revolving around human relationships/breakups, but this is different. Rebecca's numbness to the whole thing is, to be honest here, relatable. I've been in that situation, and I'm sure many other people have as well. Growing attached to other people and sudden, unprecedented detachment is painful, and you've captured this well through your narrative. The retailiative feelings towards others seen with the person are logical and believable, and well-placed into the story. I hope to see more on this piece soon; it's really good ^-^

Love it!

Daryl isn't my favorite character off the show, but Norman is a hottie. I'm glad I found your story, it's like every time I search for fan fiction all the stories that come have 10k+ words and I don't have time for that so it's nice to find fresh stories to get into.

I'm excited to see where things head and how/if they patch their relationship up. I've subscribed and recommended!

can't wait to see how they met!

i'm digging the past/present thing, i can't wait to read it

I really, really, really hope he gets murdered.
Drink driving is never okay.

Girl, you are seriously on a roll with these stories.

Oooh very intriguing! Can't wait to read more!

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