Activate My Heart - Comments

  • AJ9

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    I'm glad Matt got through her defences, albeit probably not fully, but I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. This is a really good, different, story. Please update again soon. Xxx
    August 7th, 2017 at 01:25pm
  • Lalaster

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    @ AJ9
    Thank you <3
    August 7th, 2017 at 11:40am
  • AJ9

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    I love. This story and I'm very keen to see where it goes! Please update again soon. Xxx
    August 6th, 2017 at 11:16pm
  • Lalaster

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    @ mrsmshadz
    At your service. :)
    Just updated.
    Thank you!
    August 6th, 2017 at 11:10am
  • mrsmshadz

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    More please!
    July 4th, 2017 at 09:51am
  • RavenArtist93

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    Once again the pure powerful emotion within this Azaelia character truly makes me see everything within her eyes and feel her pain. Matt obviously shows great concern for her and doesn't want her to suffer through such a terrible fate to her life. I adore that strength and kindness he has, especially when it came to confronting her about the heroin. The two characters alone give a preview of an oncoming adventure that would shape a possible friendship or maybe a future "relationship". Not gonna say anything until I read more, which I hope there will be! lol
    Great job, woman :)
    October 14th, 2016 at 06:33am
  • Lalaster

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    @ RavenArtist93
    Thank you. Very Happy Mr. Green
    Hug
    September 29th, 2016 at 11:19pm
  • RavenArtist93

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    As always love, your stories are amazing.
    The details you put into these characters are something a lot of authors seem to miss out on. You make them feel so real; you make the reader feel like their soul went into these characters and are looking through their eyes, feeling every touch and emotion that is expressed from them. My heart is hurting for this girl. How you told how she was going through her high as so beautifully and hauntingly detailed. Of course SuperMatt comes to the rescue!...or so it seems.
    Beautiful chapter, can't wait for more bestie ;)
    September 29th, 2016 at 11:09pm
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    @ RoCk_PrInCeSs_PR
    Thank you so much!! Hug
    September 29th, 2016 at 06:08am
  • Fuck You Mibba!

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    Wow This is amazing. Wow! This first chapter had me holding the brace of my sofa very hard. It was intense. I could feel her pain and I can't wait to see where you go with this. Amazing first chapter. Rec and Subscribed! Mr. Green
    September 29th, 2016 at 02:59am