I'm glad Matt got through her defences, albeit probably not fully, but I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. This is a really good, different, story. Please update again soon. Xxx
Once again the pure powerful emotion within this Azaelia character truly makes me see everything within her eyes and feel her pain. Matt obviously shows great concern for her and doesn't want her to suffer through such a terrible fate to her life. I adore that strength and kindness he has, especially when it came to confronting her about the heroin. The two characters alone give a preview of an oncoming adventure that would shape a possible friendship or maybe a future "relationship". Not gonna say anything until I read more, which I hope there will be! lol Great job, woman :)
As always love, your stories are amazing. The details you put into these characters are something a lot of authors seem to miss out on. You make them feel so real; you make the reader feel like their soul went into these characters and are looking through their eyes, feeling every touch and emotion that is expressed from them. My heart is hurting for this girl. How you told how she was going through her high as so beautifully and hauntingly detailed. Of course SuperMatt comes to the rescue!...or so it seems. Beautiful chapter, can't wait for more bestie ;)
This is amazing. Wow! This first chapter had me holding the brace of my sofa very hard. It was intense. I could feel her pain and I can't wait to see where you go with this. Amazing first chapter. Rec and Subscribed!