Pure Thoughts - Comments

Sooo i've just re-read the existing chapters and I still love it are you going to keep writing on it?? I soooo need to know the full story

I absolutely love this story! Are you planning on finishing?

This is honestly the best Sirius story I've read in years!! The care and detail
you put into writing really shows and I've laughed and giggled out loud on many an occasion (like the summer where it was all letters back and forth). The scene w Remus getting a hard-on in the broom closet made me squeal too lol. I'm excited to see where this goes and I salivate at the prospect of a new chapter, please update soon :)

that permanent marker prank was hilarious!! but then it kinda came and bit her in the ass when she realised that damn, he's good looking and she's reacting funny to him.. i'm always team sirius

Loved this chapter and can't wait for more!

Oh my god! That was the greatest chapter ever, especially Ellie and Lily pranking James and Surius!

Great update!! I do think this is a good place right now for her and Remus, however things will soon change. Her impending words of times getting darker is like an omen. I'm excited to see how she will handle the next full moon and how Remus' inner wolf will handle her

This is one of my favorite stories of all time. I absolutely love how sweet Remus is towards Ellie, but I equally love the playfulness with Sirius!! Totally conflicted!! And I love the tension between James and Lily!! Can't wait until the next update! <3

I absolutely loved this, every part of it. Sirius is such a prev, but he's a guy so it's expected I guess. I thought it was cute that Ellie played matchmaker with Frank and Alice and that she was in such a good mood because of it. I'd like to see more of her kindness. Keep up the amazing writing!!!

ah man i'm sorry! I totally forgot to comment on the chapter before this, I read it on my phone one morning before work and then thought that i'd comment when I got home again and totally slipped my mind.. BUT I though it was so sweet of David- to get that she was into Remus and wasn't a jerk about it. And I kind of hope that in future chapters we'll find out real quick that he's with someone great

ugh, Ellie and Remus are so.. they're almost too sweet atm! hahah! it's in the beginning and still fresh, and Remus is such a nice boy so no wonder curious how they'll be around fullmoon though, when the possessive wolfe is closer to the surface, will he become jealous and stuff if/when she talks to her other male friends?? can't wait to find out

"Say, Darensbourg, how much do I get if I can fling this potato right into your cleavage?" I just adore him! he's such a teenage boy!!

and yes, I do want to see Ellie with Sirius. I mean her and Remus are super-sweet BUT her and Sirius? Come on, both of them have family that ususally end up in Slytherin, so it's in both of them, the way they are around each other.. PPL would have to take cover not to get burned..

Lily and James.. Oh I can't wait for the day when Lily finally see the light

Oh damn, a novel! That's amazing! I take back my question then. I guess I assumed the story would be short story.
In that case, I'm excited for the future and can't wait until they're together!

@ Star
Of course, she will be with Sirius in the long run. This story is novel length, so that means +500k for me. It's a book , not just a little chapter. It's rare people end up with the first one they've kissed for the rest of their lives (remember they're 13/14 years old now). Sirius and Ellie will shine and they will have their time. Don't worry, it will happen eventually. As much as people like Remus and Ellie now, their personalities won't match well enough to be in a relationship.

I thought she was getting with Sirius.
Is that not happening anymore?

THANK GOD!!! Took him long enough to grow a pair!! I thought their first kiss was lovely! And I'm pleased that James has taken the big brother role on. I'm sure Peter is crushed but I'm sure that will play out. Can't wait until the next chapter <3

FINALLY THEY KISS! Took Remus long enough to grow a pair!
The end was great, especially James threatening Remus. It was my favorite part aside from Remus finally telling Ellie.

This is so incredibly well written and brilliant!! Absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter!!

Oh my god that whole scene with James and Sirius was great I practically died laughing! And I cannot wait for Remus to finally grow a set of balls and tell Ellie how he really feels.

OOOH!! David asked her on a date!!! didn't sound like any of the boys were happy with that
ugh, Remus!! He really needs to tell her the truth about why he didn't want her to know.. he put his foot in his mouth...

@ TheLovelessXxX
Thank you, happy to see that you're enjoying it.

@ WorshipCupcakes
Haha I love that you didn't expect it.

That was not what I was expecting at all. It was still amazing though. Can't wait for the next update!