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  • amandarenee08

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    OMG! I have missed this story! Amazing update! Arms
    April 12th, 2020 at 03:52pm
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    Ohhhhhh.... I loved this update! It's getting intense now. I need more, please!
    March 25th, 2018 at 01:11am
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    Amazing update!
    March 24th, 2018 at 07:01pm
  • amandarenee08

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    Lovvvved it!
    March 17th, 2018 at 01:08am
  • amandarenee08

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    Loved the update I can't wait to see more!!!!
    March 16th, 2018 at 02:13pm
  • iamanamelessfangirl

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    I love this so much it's amazing!
    June 25th, 2017 at 10:59am
  • AngelicWasteland;

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    I'm really loving this! I love the fact that Chris and Raiden are now together. Poor Micah :( He seemed like a decent bloke, stupid Andy!
    June 20th, 2017 at 06:03pm
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    I'm really loving this! I love the fact that Chris and Raiden are now together. Poor Micah :( He seemed like a decent bloke, stupid Andy!
    June 20th, 2017 at 06:02pm
  • warmaiden

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    i normally don't read slash, but i've got to say there's potential in this.

    andy is in no doubt an asshole for beating the shit out of raiden for burning last night's dinner. the classic "abusive relationship" can be easily generic in terms of stories like these, & while i'm just on the first chapter, i hope you guys keep this in mind so raiden will have a character growth that could be very well appreciative & powerful.

    i think there's some awkward dialogue between andy & raiden. it just doesn't seem to flow easily or realistically. other than that, i think it's a very interesting start. good luck on this
    May 27th, 2017 at 12:48am
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    I've only read up to chapter 5 so far, but I will read the rest! This story is interesting and I like the fact that although the characters are linked, you get to see both of their stories as the chapters switch. The switch from author to author is smooth and it's easy to keep up! I'm interested to read more and find out where this goes :)
    April 16th, 2017 at 06:57pm
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    Thank you! We love writing this so far.
    November 22nd, 2016 at 03:09am
  • Amberwrites15

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    I had to read all the posted chapters before i paused to say...i love this story. All the characters really almost seem real and im psyched to read another chapter Very Happy
    November 22nd, 2016 at 12:38am
  • amandarenee08

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    I really like this story!
    November 13th, 2016 at 12:48pm
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